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Me (The New Version)
Me
I am me
Some one
Who knows many things
Of little meaning. 5
I
Be the type of guy
That makes others laugh
Sometimes
At what I say to them 10
I
Be someone
Who lets nothing make him mad or sad,
But lets everything that caN make him glad, glad.
Me 15
I am me
55, brown hair, blue eyes,
The leastest greatest teen boy alive,
Who happens to think you
Are a very cute girl. 20
I am me
Some one
Who knows many things
Of little meaning. 5
I
Be the type of guy
That makes others laugh
Sometimes
At what I say to them 10
I
Be someone
Who lets nothing make him mad or sad,
But lets everything that caN make him glad, glad.
Me 15
I am me
55, brown hair, blue eyes,
The leastest greatest teen boy alive,
Who happens to think you
Are a very cute girl. 20
Published 13th Apr 2015
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13th Apr 2015 11:28am
I could tell this poem was written by a teenager because it's exactly like what I wrote when I was a teenager (only from a girl's perspective) The best verses are the first and the last. There is promise here. Keep trying and you will amaze yourself one day.
