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Self forfilling prophecy
Crying so much that your eyelids get heavy is not a suitable sleeping remedy.
I know I write a lot of my tails of trials. Though I'm sure I'll be OK.
With a flair for dramatics I overstate my point. As any human I fight my emotions.
I pick them out and I focus on them, when I don't they manifest in front of me regardless; in a salty stream or and iron cage.
We're built for this, both you and I but my structure seems a little loose at the moment.
I'll be OK, I promised myself I'd get better as a self for filing prophecy.
With my faith and my support, I'll get over this... Not necessarily with ease but I have the tools to break the doors to my heavy heart but the lord has the keys.
I know I write a lot of my tails of trials. Though I'm sure I'll be OK.
With a flair for dramatics I overstate my point. As any human I fight my emotions.
I pick them out and I focus on them, when I don't they manifest in front of me regardless; in a salty stream or and iron cage.
We're built for this, both you and I but my structure seems a little loose at the moment.
I'll be OK, I promised myself I'd get better as a self for filing prophecy.
With my faith and my support, I'll get over this... Not necessarily with ease but I have the tools to break the doors to my heavy heart but the lord has the keys.
Published 11th Apr 2015
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12th Apr 2015 00:00am
Your alternative views of "self fulfilling prophecy" are intriguing, and your wordplay is deft. Your structure is, as you say, a little loose, but that's fine. Structure can get in the way. I'm delighted you have faith. The idea that the Lord has the keys is always a reassurance. Great job, Whovian. I hope your heart grows lighter.
12th Apr 2015 00:07am
What you tell yourself is the most important; don't let anyone talk you out of who you are. I love this part: "With a flair for dramatics I overstate my point...”
It’s okay to argue with yourself and not like what you see. My mind tells me; believe it or not you’re probably understating your point. It just gets too trivial to bother with. The most important things in this world become trivial very quickly because they’re not important, seemingly – but truly they are, it’s just that you can’t change anything on the outside and so the energy seems wasted. It’s not wasted; someone will hear it even if it’s you. Get it off your head, and if your right your right, and if your wrong, your wrong. It’s okay to be wrong. Even when you’re an adult, it’s still okay to be wrong.
It’s the ones that can never admit they’re wrong that get caught in the drama whirlwind and never make progress. They have something to prove; their foolishness. They are never wrong, and when you’re never wrong. You cannot see the other side in order to change it.
I was just talking it over with myself the other day; how will I ever become the published writer if I just let everything roll away and never let the drama in? I can’t stand drama in reality; I’ll either meet it at the door or show it the door immediately. And so what do I do with all this crazy that’s leftover? Write it up and send it to Hollywood, I guess. The ambivalent thought is a wonderful thing. Most writers are filled with self-doubt. Write it out, share it if needs be to get perspective, and then answer it. It’s my structure and form that needs worked on too. But the function and reason is sound. I've read many of your writings. I start to comment but it starts me off writing on my deeper thoughts and so the comment gets lost and I don't get back to it. You’re not a superficial person and you think for yourself – It’s okay to go deeper. On self-fulfilled prophecy. I've known it my whole life. "Some try to tell me, Thoughts they cannot defend, Just what you want to be, You will be in the end," Nights in White Satin, the greatest song ever written. :) But that's just my opinion.
It’s okay to argue with yourself and not like what you see. My mind tells me; believe it or not you’re probably understating your point. It just gets too trivial to bother with. The most important things in this world become trivial very quickly because they’re not important, seemingly – but truly they are, it’s just that you can’t change anything on the outside and so the energy seems wasted. It’s not wasted; someone will hear it even if it’s you. Get it off your head, and if your right your right, and if your wrong, your wrong. It’s okay to be wrong. Even when you’re an adult, it’s still okay to be wrong.
It’s the ones that can never admit they’re wrong that get caught in the drama whirlwind and never make progress. They have something to prove; their foolishness. They are never wrong, and when you’re never wrong. You cannot see the other side in order to change it.
I was just talking it over with myself the other day; how will I ever become the published writer if I just let everything roll away and never let the drama in? I can’t stand drama in reality; I’ll either meet it at the door or show it the door immediately. And so what do I do with all this crazy that’s leftover? Write it up and send it to Hollywood, I guess. The ambivalent thought is a wonderful thing. Most writers are filled with self-doubt. Write it out, share it if needs be to get perspective, and then answer it. It’s my structure and form that needs worked on too. But the function and reason is sound. I've read many of your writings. I start to comment but it starts me off writing on my deeper thoughts and so the comment gets lost and I don't get back to it. You’re not a superficial person and you think for yourself – It’s okay to go deeper. On self-fulfilled prophecy. I've known it my whole life. "Some try to tell me, Thoughts they cannot defend, Just what you want to be, You will be in the end," Nights in White Satin, the greatest song ever written. :) But that's just my opinion.
12th Apr 2015 8:11pm
Pishashee, that was beautiful and just what u need to hear :3... Your writing us beautiful and you cand definitely mame it as a published writer, just as you deserve to be with your skills :).
I can only thank yiy for taking the time to write such a beautiful and meaningful comment - I am inspired and lifted and I have you to than :)
Be well
DNW x
I can only thank yiy for taking the time to write such a beautiful and meaningful comment - I am inspired and lifted and I have you to than :)
Be well
DNW x
