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Sleep, Sleep go away
Sleep, sleep go away
Slowly awaiting another day
The night is long
Problems strong.
Sleep sleep go away.
Not my order
But my brain's
Hide the dreams
Suffocate hope
Live the reality
Admire the rope.
I can't sleep at night
And the day is too bright
Jump from the stool
And say good night.
I'll live my dreams forever now
The idea so appealing,
Not via a crimson river
But hanging from the ceiling.
Slowly awaiting another day
The night is long
Problems strong.
Sleep sleep go away.
Not my order
But my brain's
Hide the dreams
Suffocate hope
Live the reality
Admire the rope.
I can't sleep at night
And the day is too bright
Jump from the stool
And say good night.
I'll live my dreams forever now
The idea so appealing,
Not via a crimson river
But hanging from the ceiling.
Published 13th Apr 2015
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13th Apr 2015 8:25pm
Really strong work, Whovian. I just hope this isn't an accurate reflection of your state of mind. Dreams die if hanging from the ceiling.
13th Apr 2015 8:41pm
I'm exhausted and each day brings another load of crap it seems but the hanging is nearly for poetic use :)... I have intention of suicide :)... They do indeed die :/
13th Apr 2015 10:57pm
beautifully written sadness :-(
even eventually a light bulb dies if you hang it from a ceiling :-)
great write
even eventually a light bulb dies if you hang it from a ceiling :-)
great write
13th Apr 2015 11:02pm
"Beautifully written sadness" - speciality of mine? Lacking the beautiful maybe? :)
Very insightful comment thank you :D
Very insightful comment thank you :D
13th Apr 2015 11:16pm
Beauty is simply a trick of the light, It has to be looked for and can be found in any given situation
see I am not as cynical as I think I am
:-)
see I am not as cynical as I think I am
:-)
13th Apr 2015 11:33pm
Exactly, positive thoughts are good, and your express them wonderfully, thank you :)
14th Apr 2015 4:44pm
This sounds like a creepy, lyrical lullaby- grasping at our hopes, stringing them with the expectation of them crashing down, yet still ending up in a wishful dream.
14th Apr 2015 5:09pm
That is such a beautiful way to describe your interpretation... Thank you XD
