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trail at sunset
She wanders down a green
and yellow hill-climb
where the bell flowers
overshadow the mounds
of buried giants,
there's a trail of dirt
in search of something old,
she sits there at sunset.
and yellow hill-climb
where the bell flowers
overshadow the mounds
of buried giants,
there's a trail of dirt
in search of something old,
she sits there at sunset.
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11th Apr 2015 3:14am
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13th Apr 2015 1:55am
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11th Apr 2015 3:40am
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Anonymous
11th Apr 2015 7:42am
Sometimes I wonder about those things too, dear lady Pi, which holds the most secrets, night, or dawn?....lovely work!
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13th Apr 2015 2:06am
I get lost under and over twilight, the degrees of the sun in the glows and shadows it creates are so interesting and ever forming. Thank you so much Le Fay. :)
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11th Apr 2015 7:46am
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11th Apr 2015 11:21am
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13th Apr 2015 2:17am
I don't know what those mounds are down at my sunset peak, but they've been stood on, jumped from, sat on, and cried over just the same. They're about 16 feet long each. I think they were supinely buried anyway. :)
Re: trail at sunset
A peaceful poem,
love the image of bell-flowers
on giant mounds
under the setting sun.
Lovely, indeed.
Would like to sit there, too.
love the image of bell-flowers
on giant mounds
under the setting sun.
Lovely, indeed.
Would like to sit there, too.
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Thank you so much Miss Chi. I love when anyone can find peace in a poem. I love when I find it too. Peace anywhere really and I'm glad to bring it. Thank you. :)
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11th Apr 2015 8:59pm
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12th Apr 2015 2:13am
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19th May 2016 3:21am
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19th May 2016 3:18am
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19th May 2016 3:20am
It was a beautiful sunset tonight;
big and fiery yellow,
I saw you at the start of forever :)
big and fiery yellow,
I saw you at the start of forever :)
Re. trail at sunset
20th May 2016 4:53pm
I had once read, for the chasers of gold, can the golden hue be any different?, had beautiful paintings of that golden hue, thanks for taking me to there! beautiful portrait indeed...
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20th May 2016 7:53pm