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Picking Flowers
Picking flowers from the garden
After a long day of mowing the lawn
I take a blue one to match her earrings
A yellow one to match that top
One red rose to complement those full lips;
Fighting off the bees to get that one…
Not sure why she likes flowers so much
They do die rather quickly
Maybe it’s the way they smell? They do have a lovely scent
Maybe because of the beauty in the delicacy?
There is tenderness in something so fragile
Could be the reminder of a nice relaxing day
Yes that could be it, I guess…
But I think it might be more the thought
That moment she realizes I had nothing else on my mind..
Nothing else, but picking flowers for my love
After a long day of mowing the lawn
I take a blue one to match her earrings
A yellow one to match that top
One red rose to complement those full lips;
Fighting off the bees to get that one…
Not sure why she likes flowers so much
They do die rather quickly
Maybe it’s the way they smell? They do have a lovely scent
Maybe because of the beauty in the delicacy?
There is tenderness in something so fragile
Could be the reminder of a nice relaxing day
Yes that could be it, I guess…
But I think it might be more the thought
That moment she realizes I had nothing else on my mind..
Nothing else, but picking flowers for my love
Published 6th Apr 2015
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6th Apr 2015 7:31pm
Yes beautiful moments when your love does something special just for you
unselfish acts of love
from pausing to listen to your thoughts
your opinions
to picking flowers
unselfish acts of love
from pausing to listen to your thoughts
your opinions
to picking flowers
6th Apr 2015 7:34pm
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2015 7:55pm
A delight to read, beautiful enchanting poem!
6th Apr 2015 7:59pm
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6th Apr 2015 8:11pm
Anonymous
6th Apr 2015 9:14pm
Beautiful, Nick.. damn powerful write... and so brilliantly done...
Dave
Dave
6th Apr 2015 9:21pm
7th Apr 2015 00:45am
Very beautiful.
Flowers are great to have especially when someone special gives you one :)
Flowers are great to have especially when someone special gives you one :)
7th Apr 2015 5:07am
7th Apr 2015 2:39am
This was a beautiful write,
I love flowers, and I also love this piece of work o:
I saw that you put a flower in the comment above so I stole it and thought id give you one too as your write was great aha x)
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I love flowers, and I also love this piece of work o:
I saw that you put a flower in the comment above so I stole it and thought id give you one too as your write was great aha x)
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7th Apr 2015 5:09am
7th Apr 2015 3:21pm
I like it and you got it right in my opinion, I love to have a garden of all plants and watch there cycle but for me its not the flower its the thought of your thought
8th Apr 2015 6:42am
11th Dec 2015 3:36pm
I loved the sentimentality of it, a beautiful work. I think you have the workings of her mind down pat.
John
John
