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Breathe
I will not talk
I will not wither on
This tangled vine
You may not know I’m
Here but if you breathe
You will catch my scent
And if you breathe out
You will feel the rush
I am right beneath your surface
Still and deep and waiting
Dive into my unknown depths
My waters of temptation
Sink beneath the surface
And drown and I
Will breathe for us both
-Zoe Richardson
I will not wither on
This tangled vine
You may not know I’m
Here but if you breathe
You will catch my scent
And if you breathe out
You will feel the rush
I am right beneath your surface
Still and deep and waiting
Dive into my unknown depths
My waters of temptation
Sink beneath the surface
And drown and I
Will breathe for us both
-Zoe Richardson
Published 3rd Apr 2015
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3rd Apr 2015 1:01pm
Nice work! I am assuming this write is from the orgasms perspective? This piece could be interpreted into so many feelings and memories by the reader.
Well done.
Well done.
3rd Apr 2015 1:27pm
3rd Apr 2015 4:04pm
Zoe, the mysterious sensuality in this piece is magical. The deeply erotic idea of breathing in your lover is thrilling!
4th Apr 2015 2:54pm
