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His Name Was Ken
His lips forged a sarcastic sympathy
Painting a portrait of arrogance
While his brush spat strokes of a crimson stained regret..
Painting a portrait of arrogance
While his brush spat strokes of a crimson stained regret..
Published 13th Nov 2009
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15th Nov 2009 10:57am
exquisite poem
btw i think u meant forget and not forged
in the first line =]]
btw i think u meant forget and not forged
in the first line =]]
15th Nov 2009 11:11am
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my piece & leave the comment! :)
I did mean forge though as in to commit forgery like to imitate (handwriting, a signature, etc.) fraudulently; fabricate a forgery.
:)
I did mean forge though as in to commit forgery like to imitate (handwriting, a signature, etc.) fraudulently; fabricate a forgery.
:)
20th Feb 2012 11:56pm
27th Dec 2012 7:16pm
Very short which makes it straight to the point. This guy was sorry and regretful, although he was not able to express it with spoken words(he ends up sounding like an a-hole). But he is able to express his sorrow through his art..reminds me of myself lol.
In regards to the above comment, I understand the word forged and its usage, and forget would make no sense at all, so im glad you ignored that one, "forged" is the best word choice for that line
Good job
In regards to the above comment, I understand the word forged and its usage, and forget would make no sense at all, so im glad you ignored that one, "forged" is the best word choice for that line
Good job
