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one more turn of the crank...
why would you give up now -
it's old but it's fixable...
and whether it works or not
love isn't a machine...
it's old but it's fixable...
and whether it works or not
love isn't a machine...
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Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 00:07am
You've got a knack for making me think. I can maybe paint pictures on a good day, but I can't make people think or get into their heads like this.
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re: Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 00:37am
thanks, oh but how do you know..?
I bet your poems make more people
think than you'll ever be aware of...
and as for the pictures we try to make,
they're already in the reader's head,
all we're doing is pointing at them..:)
thanks again...
I bet your poems make more people
think than you'll ever be aware of...
and as for the pictures we try to make,
they're already in the reader's head,
all we're doing is pointing at them..:)
thanks again...
Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 00:12am
re: Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 00:40am
Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 3:35am
There's a paradox here between the heart and the brain. I love it though, it's an excellent thought. :)
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re: Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 5:25pm
I thought the paradox was that
bit at the back, attached to the
thigummyjig, you know..:)
bit at the back, attached to the
thigummyjig, you know..:)
Re: one more turn of the crank...
29th Mar 2015 3:35pm
While not a machine,
Nonetheless...
Love still requires
Its fair share of fine tuning...
To be sure! ;)
Nonetheless...
Love still requires
Its fair share of fine tuning...
To be sure! ;)
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29th Mar 2015 5:28pm
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