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they were queueing up...
she made a fool of him
in front of everyone - although
to be fair they didn't mind waiting
their turn...
in front of everyone - although
to be fair they didn't mind waiting
their turn...
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28th Mar 2015 4:44am
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28th Mar 2015 2:10pm
Re: they were queueing up...
28th Mar 2015 7:07pm
Sometimes I wish there were less of this type around, but I'd probably be the first to complain if they were gone.
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28th Mar 2015 9:03pm
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29th Mar 2015 00:11am
Lol sorry, your poem just got me thinking about a few women I've known...
I was meaning to put a compliment in there somewhere, I huess I got lost in thought.
You have a real gift of packing a lot of meaning into very few words.
I was meaning to put a compliment in there somewhere, I huess I got lost in thought.
You have a real gift of packing a lot of meaning into very few words.
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29th Mar 2015 00:26am
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