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LET ME SLEEP!
i just want some peace
and the only way to get that
would to sleep
i just want to sleep
i dont hate living
but id just rather sleep is all
to escape the insanity of
everyday life
i just want to sleep
just give me a whole week perhaps
shoot me up with sleepy shit
and just let me sleep
im tired of all the dependance on me
and the weight on my shoulders
every second i am getting older
PLEASE, i just want to sleep
please, let me sleep
and the only way to get that
would to sleep
i just want to sleep
i dont hate living
but id just rather sleep is all
to escape the insanity of
everyday life
i just want to sleep
just give me a whole week perhaps
shoot me up with sleepy shit
and just let me sleep
im tired of all the dependance on me
and the weight on my shoulders
every second i am getting older
PLEASE, i just want to sleep
please, let me sleep
Published 16th May 2011
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6th Jun 2011 2:38am
yes i can relate to this poem.
well written easy to read.
some small edits i night point out.
L3 would (be) to sleep
L8 everyday life (and all) to keep the flow or rhythm.
nice!
well written easy to read.
some small edits i night point out.
L3 would (be) to sleep
L8 everyday life (and all) to keep the flow or rhythm.
nice!
19th Jun 2011 9:31pm
