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Just a Little Trip

Lost Girl needs a long, over-due vacation for a while.
It's been a long time in the running.
She shall miss everyone on her favorite website.
She hopes they (the ones in the white coats)
will let her return after a while,
and that the poetry can flow once more through her.

She wants to say she's sorry for all the beautiful
comments she never responded to. For some reason,
she always felt awkward, never feeling her responses
would be good enough.

But there are so many gifted writers she will miss.
She won't name names, but they know who they are.

She hopes everyone will be well and at peace.
She sighs fondly with love and hits
the "submit" button.

Written by toniscales

(Lost Girl)

Published 25th Mar 2015

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Re: Just a Little Trip

MadameLavender

25th Mar 2015 9:22pm

We all need a mental break and a vacation at times--follow your heart and your mind, and remember that you are always welcome here. Personally, I'm glad you found this site, and I've enjoyed reading you and having you here, even though I may not have commented as much as I wanted to, or should have, for various reasons of my own, none of them a reflection of who you are. You are a gifted poet, and we all transition at times, and must follow that lead, but our giftings never leave us--they just morph, rearrange, get stronger, and guide us to where we are supposed to be, next. We'll still be here, Toni, and blessings to you and yours! xoxo--ML