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Sidewalks & Shadows
the shadow stalks the sidewalk
tracking the time till midnight
self seeking to find the lost child
inside the man who feels the loss
the shadow of a man
still at loss as a child
scared by the shadows
that seek the sidewalk
tracking the time till midnight
self seeking to find the lost child
inside the man who feels the loss
the shadow of a man
still at loss as a child
scared by the shadows
that seek the sidewalk
Published 20th Mar 2015
| Edited 21st Mar 2015
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21st Mar 2015 00:36am
I love the way this comes full circle, and the uncertainty and fear it communicates
21st Mar 2015 6:13am
Wrote this late last night and feel like I'm chasing my tale like a dog might do!
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21st Mar 2015 00:39am
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21st Mar 2015 6:18am
I confess I can take no credit for this as it was a prompt for a competition...
"Your prompt a recent poem thingy I wrote
"there is no greater loss
than losing ones self
for the man seeking his child
is no more than a shadow
on a sidewalk...at midnight "
Written by a poet called: Ellipses
*was posting late last night and had not meant to post on another site..
"Your prompt a recent poem thingy I wrote
"there is no greater loss
than losing ones self
for the man seeking his child
is no more than a shadow
on a sidewalk...at midnight "
Written by a poet called: Ellipses
*was posting late last night and had not meant to post on another site..
