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A Mother's protection, a promise
Mummy, I can’t sleep.
There are demonic scenes that continuously harass me.
They know what memories to access;
what buttons to press;
they’re good at depriving me
of my rest.
It’s like an internal cinema,
‘Twisted Pictures presents...’
...the thoughts you locked in the safe
Inside your head.
I’m left to discuss this with myself,
Though all I can do is argue.
Mummy make it better
I beg you.
[I know ‘Twisted Pictures’ exists – all rights reserved to them]
There are demonic scenes that continuously harass me.
They know what memories to access;
what buttons to press;
they’re good at depriving me
of my rest.
It’s like an internal cinema,
‘Twisted Pictures presents...’
...the thoughts you locked in the safe
Inside your head.
I’m left to discuss this with myself,
Though all I can do is argue.
Mummy make it better
I beg you.
[I know ‘Twisted Pictures’ exists – all rights reserved to them]
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Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
13th Mar 2015 9:56pm
re: Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
13th Mar 2015 10:05pm
Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
13th Mar 2015 10:45pm
I had this problem as a kid, I watched a documentary on Hell (and also several episodes of a haunting) and I was traumatized. I always thought there was a demon in my closet waiting to possess me and twist my body like a pretzel like they do in some movies. Nicely done, not a pleasant memory for me but I still like this poem!!
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re: Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
Sorry to have fed the reminder...
My fear is the girl from the ring and the decomposed lady in the grudge a d the shinning... *shudder* used to hate admiting that but I'm cool with it now
My fear is the girl from the ring and the decomposed lady in the grudge a d the shinning... *shudder* used to hate admiting that but I'm cool with it now
re: re: Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
13th Mar 2015 11:17pm
Hahahahahaha don't worry about I'm long over it, and I really should watch that movie it sounds good
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13th Mar 2015 11:18pm
Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
13th Mar 2015 11:34pm
has a real echo of PTSD about it - fantastic ink dark ink - just my cup of tea
:-)
:-)
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re: Re: A Mother's protection, a promise
13th Mar 2015 11:38pm
Oh your right :D thanks for your interpretation - love it!
And thanks glad you enjoyed :D
And thanks glad you enjoyed :D
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16th Mar 2015 8:13pm
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17th Mar 2015 8:25pm
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