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Unfolding petals
The sun reveals
the jewel of the flower
A heart of emptiness
The sun glints
Upon prayer wheels
Lightening shade
Engraved jade
Sweetness like grapes
Our world is nothing
But all our desires
The sun reveals
the jewel of the flower
A heart of emptiness
The sun glints
Upon prayer wheels
Lightening shade
Engraved jade
Sweetness like grapes
Our world is nothing
But all our desires
Published 7th Mar 2015
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7th Mar 2015 7:12am
7th Mar 2015 1:59pm
7th Mar 2015 8:30am
Upon prayer wheels ... This is a great bridge between your first and last stanza.
The whole piece speaks of human frailty
The whole piece speaks of human frailty
7th Mar 2015 2:03pm
Thanks Lobo - your comment made me think of Alexander Pope's line - who breaks a butterfly upon a wheel
Anonymous
7th Mar 2015 9:29am
Dawns energy radiates through this...
7th Mar 2015 2:03pm
Anonymous
7th Mar 2015 10:11am
trewf
7th Mar 2015 3:59pm
7th Mar 2015 7:29pm
8th Mar 2015 2:30am
Isn't desire part of human weakness and strength at the same time?
Lovely mirrored reflection of the stanzas.
Lovely mirrored reflection of the stanzas.
8th Mar 2015 10:03am
