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Sunday
The sun is screaming
angrily,
slapping me
around the neck
face
ears
red welts lift
from pale skin
like
fiery fingerprints
angrily,
slapping me
around the neck
face
ears
red welts lift
from pale skin
like
fiery fingerprints
Published 4th Mar 2015
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Anonymous
4th Mar 2015 8:50pm
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4th Mar 2015 10:26pm
The sun is usually characterized as benign. Not this time. Always good to find an image presented in a different light. Clever pun to the title!
5th Mar 2015 11:17am
