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Wants and Needs
All I've ever wanted is to be needed
And be worth living for
All I've ever needed is to be wanted
And be worth dying for
And be worth living for
All I've ever needed is to be wanted
And be worth dying for
Published 11th May 2011
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Anonymous
11th May 2011 9:45pm
This would be a really good Epitaph if you changed the wording around a little and made it rhyme!
(just saying that's all)
Otherwise it seems more like a motto or creed rather than a self poem. Sometimes more is less, but in this instance I would have wanted more.
Either way is fine...overall good job!
(just saying that's all)
Otherwise it seems more like a motto or creed rather than a self poem. Sometimes more is less, but in this instance I would have wanted more.
Either way is fine...overall good job!
15th Sep 2013 1:41pm
