¡!¡My dearest love...¡!¡

kinda sweet the way you combine the lilting melody of the Romantics with your colloquial tongue.

'thy lips of mine' might read better as 'these lips of mine.' just a suggestion...

If you want to sound like something from the 1600s, you should study Shakespeare some more.  
"Thee" and "thine" and "thy" and "thou" are often confused here. Along with some verb tense.  
   
Not a whole lot of changes, but I edited here:  
   
   
"thy love..." I feel you everywhere I walk. How can I express myself to thee how I feel? Dost thou love me so? I would ask myself with a slight giggle. ¡!¡My dearest love...¡!¡ Oh how I miss you so. I have no words to speak about thee. Thou hast taken me and stolen my heart from my chest. ¡!¡My dearest love...¡!¡ your kind words sweeten my lips. I love thee very much. Hearing your serenade of words flow out of thy mouth makes me shudder and melt into thy hands of mystery...¡!¡my dearest love...¡!¡ ~Evangaline💔    
   
   
You could also change each "you" to "thee" and each "your" to "thy" or "thine", but I think even Shakespeare mixed the old with the new in some of his literature, so that option is yours whether or not to change those.  
   
Very lovely sentiments just the same.:)

Thank you so much to be honest it was my first Shakespearean poem I have ever done ha ha thank you so so much i appreciate Your inputs and i thank you for the link!😄😄😄

perhaps this will help

http://shakespeare.about.com/od/teachingshakespeare/a/shakespeare_words.htm

Nice write..


Dave