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Upside-Down & Inside-Out
The world is
Upside-down
And I am
Standing on the ceiling.
I gain this new perspective
With a smile.
The sky is
Inside-out
And I am
Flying through the water.
Laughingly I wave
As birds swim by.
The wind
Is colored purple
And the water's
Running backward.
The animals can speak
And the flowers love to gossip.
Our pillow
Is the soft grass
And the night sky
Is our blanket
And the stars sing us to sleep
For the world is what we make it.
Upside-down
And I am
Standing on the ceiling.
I gain this new perspective
With a smile.
The sky is
Inside-out
And I am
Flying through the water.
Laughingly I wave
As birds swim by.
The wind
Is colored purple
And the water's
Running backward.
The animals can speak
And the flowers love to gossip.
Our pillow
Is the soft grass
And the night sky
Is our blanket
And the stars sing us to sleep
For the world is what we make it.
Published 11th May 2011
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11th May 2011 6:06pm
18th May 2011 5:51am
11th May 2011 10:07pm
This poem is masterfully written. I love to pieces.There is only one thing wrong with it -
I did not write it.
I did not write it.
18th May 2011 5:52am
Haha. Thank you very much. This is what comes from a 6am sleep deprived happy. :)
12th May 2011 4:10am
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15th May 2011 5:53pm
I am envious because I have never been able to write a happy poem, sarcastic, yes, but never happy. You already know that this is one of my favorite of yours and now everyone else can see why. Reading List!
18th May 2011 5:51am
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20th May 2011 4:58pm
wow that is such a pleasure to read. You have put the words perfectly to what i have been trying (and failing)to write for a while.
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21st May 2011 6:33am
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14th Jul 2012 11:19am
My feet are tapping as I read this; again.
"The animals can speak And the flowers love to gossip" is delightful. I feel that way about nature.
Delightful early morn read for me! Thank you
"The animals can speak And the flowers love to gossip" is delightful. I feel that way about nature.
Delightful early morn read for me! Thank you
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13th Nov 2012 7:32pm
this is a very whimsical piece. the world can be topsey-turvey, and you make it sound like a wonderful place to be.
