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Heartbeats
To be alive you must ache!
To be alive you must ache!
To be alive you must ache!
To ache is to be alive.
Poor me, poor me; poor poor me.
To be alive you must ache!
To be alive you must ache!
To ache is to be alive.
Poor me, poor me; poor poor me.
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Re: Heartthrobs
26th Feb 2015 10:56pm
I was once told that some pain is good, it helps you to appreciate life when it is gone, and it is sometimes an indicator of growth and can also teach you lessons... But, I agree with the "poor poor me" because sometimes it seems excessive. Strong concepts here. Thank you.
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re: Re: Heartthrobs
27th Feb 2015 7:25pm
There are rare conditions, but we all have pain. It is that some think that there's was so bad, and so much worse, that instead of dealing with the issues in a real and honest sense, it becomes displaced, and in that it must be inflicted unto others for selfish satisfaction. And in being honest with yourself, and dealing with your pain; that's what makes you a hero. Thank you, Sammy.
Re: Heartthrobs
Anonymous
27th Feb 2015 00:06am
Thump thump pish!!!!
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27th Feb 2015 7:27pm
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Re: Heartthrobs
27th Feb 2015 7:40am
atrial fib cannot be zapped back in line because of clot. okay, just see what happens wit a-fib & clot meds.....meanwhile nasty respiratory distress when laydown. Seen cardiologist so many times this week, he beginning to look like 9th grader....s this the end of my 15yr reprieve?
"Poor Old Heart" has writ 1,800 poUms on this site alone in 3yrs.........HA....
your po'em s eXcell'ent
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re: Re: Heartthrobs
Thank you for your compliment. It's like a matrix. Not the Hollywood version as Keanu Reeves would have it. But all the syllables sound in-sync as a heartbeat. A 3x7 Matrix on the grid. It has three rows and seven syllables. The computer says it only has six. That's called a murmur. I've always had one. And Cardiomegaly. I think it's going to explode sometimes with pain. My appendix did the same thing when I was ten. My appendix was deformed and long as a pencil, it was full of ulcers. It sits in a jar of formaldehyde at the KU School of Medicine. I'm studied by science. It's why I studied Proust. There are tears on the inside, and when it's not released it causes diseased organs. Write all the poems you need to. Elevate your bed 30 degrees, and point it toward the South. There is a beautiful breeze there.
Re: Heartthrobs
28th Feb 2015 00:32am
"there's nothing good or bad
but thinking makes it so.."
I mean, did the man never
have toothache..!
but thinking makes it so.."
I mean, did the man never
have toothache..!
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