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Cold empty world
Walking alone in this cold empty world.
Walking to the dead tree to hang my self.
There is no point in living in this empty world.
Life is a nightmare maybe death is better.
I am not scared to die I am more tired of living this life.
The feeling of the rope knowing it's going to free me from this cold empty world .....
Walking to the dead tree to hang my self.
There is no point in living in this empty world.
Life is a nightmare maybe death is better.
I am not scared to die I am more tired of living this life.
The feeling of the rope knowing it's going to free me from this cold empty world .....
Published 25th Feb 2015
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25th Feb 2015 7:29pm
So dark and strait to the point. We all don't win the fight against life.
*hug*
*hug*
26th Feb 2015 12:47pm
26th Feb 2015 4:24am
"Walking to the dead tree to hang my self. " Damn this line drew me in!
Good luck with your struggles!
Good luck with your struggles!
26th Feb 2015 12:45pm
Thank you for your comment I wanted to do more with that line but nothing was coming to me .
26th Feb 2015 12:19pm
26th Feb 2015 12:47pm
