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Straight Up
"Don't get cute," she says
"Just tell me your tale, but keep it real"
I do so, recounting my brathood
Proceeding through my teens
Then alleged maturity
Evils and virtues all in a row
"Thank you for your honesty," she smiles
A tease in her eyes as she parts her thighs
"Now all you have to do is come clean."
"Just tell me your tale, but keep it real"
I do so, recounting my brathood
Proceeding through my teens
Then alleged maturity
Evils and virtues all in a row
"Thank you for your honesty," she smiles
A tease in her eyes as she parts her thighs
"Now all you have to do is come clean."
Published 19th Feb 2015
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19th Feb 2015 6:36pm
sets the scene for a seduction , Love the line "A tease in her eyes as she parts her thighs.. oh the imagery! Cheers1 Scot.
19th Feb 2015 6:50pm
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19th Feb 2015 6:46pm
what a little scene! i need a drink. i'll take it straight up this time instead of neat. it only seems fitting.
19th Feb 2015 6:52pm
Anonymous
19th Feb 2015 6:58pm
i spit water at my computer screen after reading that comment. crow, crow...what am i going to do with you?! ;)
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19th Feb 2015 7:08pm
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19th Feb 2015 8:55pm
Maybe sometime I'll try for an epic erotic. Just not sure I'm up for it. Thanks Schiitaryn!
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19th Feb 2015 9:32pm
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19th Feb 2015 7:58pm
19th Feb 2015 8:56pm
19th Feb 2015 9:39pm
I enjoyed the clever way you twist your words in here Crow, Nothing wrong with a pair of creamy things being offered either ;)
Everyone has a lure
Always
Zazzles xo
Everyone has a lure
Always
Zazzles xo
Sounds irresistible, Jackie. Can't get enough of creamy things, the softer the better!
20th Feb 2015 3:15am
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20th Feb 2015 2:18am
Sometimes it's worth it. Guess it depends on my level of desperation, which is usually pretty high. Thanks, Virginia
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20th Feb 2015 00:55am
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27th Feb 2015 11:26am
Honesty and clarity is sexier than a nun in a two piece. Sex is easy, truth comes hard. Awesome release of what we've all felt, comrade!
27th Feb 2015 7:28pm
