Flicker God

i always hate the use of punctuation consistently,

prolly cuz i'm not smart enough to know what should and shouldn't do a certain thing....


and maybe i am but just don't really like certain tempos.

this goes perfect for me though.

maybe i'm a stoner but the use of punctuation,
like a word,
has been important lately

i like it mrs A..........

This is written with precision and fine word choice.  Its meaning probably eludes me.  The "liquid gold runs upward" makes me wonder if this has to do with drugs.  "Flicker" possibly a lighter.  I may be cynical, and I may be way off.  In any case, this is fine, concise work, and can inspire a multitude of thoughts, hopefully not all as troubling as mine.

Feels like one of them uprising, revolution songs to me...written beautifully as always. Much love to ya, Atakti :)

short and succulently sweet.

Damm

Almost like a vision of sorts

There's something wonderfully primal, savage and mythical about this poem, like a reveal, prophetic verse. I think there should be a line break after scorched in S3, however, and some more narrative would help this poem's memorability. Thank you for the read.