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Red Saturday
Halt the hassled life
to recall a promise kept
For all year have feelings
for the other slept
A ring you couldn't afford
if it wasn't for her
One once made of pixels
finds its way to a finger
Flirtation and conversation
over a dinner so robust
An investment made in love
transmuted into lust
An open box of wrappers
calories disregarded
Early eve curtains close
and are not to be parted
to recall a promise kept
For all year have feelings
for the other slept
A ring you couldn't afford
if it wasn't for her
One once made of pixels
finds its way to a finger
Flirtation and conversation
over a dinner so robust
An investment made in love
transmuted into lust
An open box of wrappers
calories disregarded
Early eve curtains close
and are not to be parted
Published 14th Feb 2015
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