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Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
In man I do not trust, but the one,
the one that does make my head turn,
revealing my vulnerable bloodline,
for it's upon this moonless night
I turned,
turned to this god of darkness,
creature of the moonless night,
does make me become the sacrifice,
prisoner to his want,
feeding from my torture till sated.
So enticing, a shapely specimen
the kind of which I must explore
figure that lures, bringing me to her whim
getting pulled towards glamorous eyes
taking in passions desire
approaching to sink my teeth
a sexual moan, blood pumping
now come, embrace Mort with a kiss
to seal our pact.
Taken by death, reborn on the glow,
a master to learn from, I now desire,
craving his lustful touch, fueled by
his teachings, the widow of breathless
sleep by day, awaiting the nightfall,
a servant for his feeding need I have become.
Many years of blood lust, now quest for love
found it in a sexual deviant, yet so much more
intent as pure as her ocean eyes
has me trembling at my knees
bonding each other with blood and body
I kneel before you to ask you into forever
the ultimate vow I betrothed upon you
will you sleep in my coffin tonight?
the one that does make my head turn,
revealing my vulnerable bloodline,
for it's upon this moonless night
I turned,
turned to this god of darkness,
creature of the moonless night,
does make me become the sacrifice,
prisoner to his want,
feeding from my torture till sated.
So enticing, a shapely specimen
the kind of which I must explore
figure that lures, bringing me to her whim
getting pulled towards glamorous eyes
taking in passions desire
approaching to sink my teeth
a sexual moan, blood pumping
now come, embrace Mort with a kiss
to seal our pact.
Taken by death, reborn on the glow,
a master to learn from, I now desire,
craving his lustful touch, fueled by
his teachings, the widow of breathless
sleep by day, awaiting the nightfall,
a servant for his feeding need I have become.
Many years of blood lust, now quest for love
found it in a sexual deviant, yet so much more
intent as pure as her ocean eyes
has me trembling at my knees
bonding each other with blood and body
I kneel before you to ask you into forever
the ultimate vow I betrothed upon you
will you sleep in my coffin tonight?
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Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
6th Feb 2015 7:03pm
Just wanted to say thank you to Rose! Always love working with her. She is one of my favorite poets on here. Has such a big heart.
Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
Anonymous
6th Feb 2015 7:07pm
Beautiful write, DC and Rose.. this is just brilliant work.. you two shine bright on this collaboration.. congrats to you both..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
6th Feb 2015 7:33pm
This is fantastic, dark and erotic.
You both did a beautiful job with this poem.
You both did a beautiful job with this poem.
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re: Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
6th Feb 2015 7:45pm
Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
6th Feb 2015 7:56pm
incredibly beautiful.
so lustful and seductive and little dark.
very well done :)
so lustful and seductive and little dark.
very well done :)
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6th Feb 2015 8:00pm
Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
7th Feb 2015 00:20am
I am amazed by how you use all those words
I've never written anythng close to thati mean the words I'm so simple I reckon I could never
keep those words in my mind
I've never written anythng close to thati mean the words I'm so simple I reckon I could never
keep those words in my mind
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Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
8th Feb 2015 1:25am
A Lovely "Rose"
Great Poem both of you guys
I have to admit I like co-writes a lot please do more...
Great Poem both of you guys
I have to admit I like co-writes a lot please do more...
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Re: Vampire's Vow (Co-written with Rose)
14th Feb 2015 8:44am
the two of you coalesce beautifully in this macabre vow. i adore the interweaving of both light & dark imagery & you've done a lovely job of that...
... cheers for a good read
... cheers for a good read
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14th Feb 2015 12:51pm