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Wives
Companion, companion,
Completer of thoughts.
Builder of Home.
Producer of life.
An army of might.
But with one little scratch,
You can sink to the depths.
Completer of thoughts.
Builder of Home.
Producer of life.
An army of might.
But with one little scratch,
You can sink to the depths.
Published 5th Feb 2015
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5th Feb 2015 3:09am
i have went through several different types of writing long poems short poems for a long time i have wrote the short ones like yours i like to write them sometimes you can make a few lines say
a lot the long poems are a lot of work even one
word can make a poem a lot better i will post several thanks glad to meet you stay in touch
a lot the long poems are a lot of work even one
word can make a poem a lot better i will post several thanks glad to meet you stay in touch
5th Feb 2015 4:59am
Thankyou. First poem ive wrote in 9 years. Please tell me exactly what you think. Stay nice but dont hold any punches.
7th Feb 2015 1:54am
sorry late getting back i like to write little short
storys like taht it don't take much to hurt a woman
and then you never know stay in touch
storys like taht it don't take much to hurt a woman
and then you never know stay in touch
