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THE MOTHER'S OF WAR
Who are
the mother's of war
could they be men
we see on TV
wearing a suit and tie
telling us lie after lie
who really are
the mother's of war
could they be a woman
who are hurt so badly
she can never forget
her sadness and pain
the mother's of war
could they be men
we see on TV
wearing a suit and tie
telling us lie after lie
who really are
the mother's of war
could they be a woman
who are hurt so badly
she can never forget
her sadness and pain
Published 5th Feb 2015
| Edited 8th Jan 2016
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5th Feb 2015 00:34am
This poem is difficult...and almost profound. You are saying something without quite saying anything at all. I think you should expand this...make it bigger. I can almost grasp what you are conveying but only almost. I need more!!
5th Feb 2015 00:49am
you have a very good thought it would make it a better read i wanted to keep it as so I'm working on so many excuse me thank you
5th Feb 2015 2:23am
5th Feb 2015 3:03am
i actually made two poems from what i had at first
i will see wh i can do i might make us both happy
thank you thelovepoet
i will see wh i can do i might make us both happy
thank you thelovepoet
