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The blood speaks for itself as evidence
THIS IS NOT ABOUT SELF-HARM, BUT IS MAY CONTAIN TRIGGERS. IF YOU SELF HARM PLEASE DON'T READ AND LET MY WORK BE A TRIGGER FOR YOUR SCARS. YOU HAVE MY SYMPATHY THOUGH, I'M SORRY.
Blood is trickling down the walls
Blood is staining all the doors
Tears unformed in tired, dry eyes
Can not shed, I've tried, I've tried!
See my tears on these pages
Blots that stain follow for ages
What you hide in heart to keep
Will cut until it's chance to speak
THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN DURING REALLY DARK TIMES, I DO NOT BELIEVE IT IS THE ONLY VIEW POINT FOR THIS SITUATION OR FOR LIFE.
Blood is trickling down the walls
Blood is staining all the doors
Tears unformed in tired, dry eyes
Can not shed, I've tried, I've tried!
See my tears on these pages
Blots that stain follow for ages
What you hide in heart to keep
Will cut until it's chance to speak
THIS POEM WAS WRITTEN DURING REALLY DARK TIMES, I DO NOT BELIEVE IT IS THE ONLY VIEW POINT FOR THIS SITUATION OR FOR LIFE.
Published 10th Nov 2009
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11th Nov 2009 2:19am
i understand where you're coming from, however the explanation destroys further thought for your readers to interpret what its about. it takes away from genuine primary emotion, when one is given the emotion to feel. the poem itself is explosive, but with your captions, its like a tree falling in the forest with no one around. i like the poem though.
11th Nov 2009 3:00am
Thnx! ^_^ Yeah I know what you mean, I really wish I could display it without the captions but I've never posted anything so dark before and have had experience to some degree with self harm so, yeah. It is tragic, but thnx.
Anonymous
11th May 2010 12:53pm
You really don't need to explain the intent behind this poem, or assure potential readers of anything; it isn't your responsibility. If someone interprets a piece of art the wrong way, then it's their fault, not the artist's. Anyway, this is a good poem, dark and also powerful through it's brevity and mysterious nature.
30th Jul 2011 11:15am
2nd Nov 2012 2:37am
this was pretty awesome...you you know its nice to know your not always stranded...
