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Pains feel from sharpened teeth growls scorn soul
look not into the night filled from dusk to dawn fright
Feel pains jagged stones sharpened burned fires unseen
Feel piercing of the knife far from warriors side lost
Admist shadows that fall to hide breath not air
Withers the cold bask not into the dawn
Glouries to unfold dance close hold heart that forgot
Beats feel the pain wonders defeat
6 May 2011-ALRHC
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look not into the night filled from dusk to dawn fright
Feel pains jagged stones sharpened burned fires unseen
Feel piercing of the knife far from warriors side lost
Admist shadows that fall to hide breath not air
Withers the cold bask not into the dawn
Glouries to unfold dance close hold heart that forgot
Beats feel the pain wonders defeat
6 May 2011-ALRHC
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Published 7th May 2011
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19th May 2011 3:31am
i do like this style of poetry.though i have to read it a few times before i can understand it.
i have read this a few times and i think i get most of it.
i had to look up glouries to see what it meant but i couldn't find it.
did you mean glorious or glories ?
anyhoo i did enjoy the read and look forward to reading some more.
nice one!
i have read this a few times and i think i get most of it.
i had to look up glouries to see what it meant but i couldn't find it.
did you mean glorious or glories ?
anyhoo i did enjoy the read and look forward to reading some more.
nice one!
24th May 2011 00:36am
The Glouries that I speak of are such as that of the flower Morning Glouries how they open wide with the light but within the darkness they close again but the cycle continues on
