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My City is my Flesh
I'm a city guy
I don't leave town much
A few days here and there
Just to reclaim the fresh air vibe
But truth be told
I need the city interior to feel safe
All the noise and grit and craziness
Defines me
My city is my flesh
Traveling from appointment to appointment
Cell phones, pen and paper
Road salesman coming to you next
I don't leave town much
A few days here and there
Just to reclaim the fresh air vibe
But truth be told
I need the city interior to feel safe
All the noise and grit and craziness
Defines me
My city is my flesh
Traveling from appointment to appointment
Cell phones, pen and paper
Road salesman coming to you next
Published 30th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 5:16pm
i love this. love love love.
that last stanza! perfect.
the mountains are my flesh
looking up and barely seeing the tops
coal mines, bourbon, and horses
country girl coming to you next
that last stanza! perfect.
the mountains are my flesh
looking up and barely seeing the tops
coal mines, bourbon, and horses
country girl coming to you next
30th Jan 2015 5:27pm
30th Jan 2015 5:18pm
great inking Poet letting us get a peak of your life excellent with love Brenda
30th Jan 2015 5:28pm
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30th Jan 2015 5:46pm
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30th Jan 2015 6:57pm
Come into the city, eat, drink, see stuff, catch the vibe, take it back home, a great way to have best of both worlds ...
Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 7:18pm
Great write! I'm a country girl myself, interesting to hear of love for the other side. :)
30th Jan 2015 8:58pm
30th Jan 2015 7:53pm
This is a great poem and I love the city too. It makes me feel safe...despite the overwhelming statistics that I am much less safe. Thanks for this great write!
30th Jan 2015 8:59pm
You def give off some edgy city vibe.
You're kinda fascinating, totally unpredictable ...
Thx for your comment
You're kinda fascinating, totally unpredictable ...
Thx for your comment
Anonymous
30th Jan 2015 9:10pm
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30th Jan 2015 9:59pm
31st Jan 2015 00:37am
excellent realistic write :-)
we are opposites despite the fact I currently live in a city :-(
we are opposites despite the fact I currently live in a city :-(
31st Jan 2015 10:12am
Thx D
My nabe is like a small town, don't think a lot of people grasp that concept ...
My nabe is like a small town, don't think a lot of people grasp that concept ...
