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So Rudely
By Enigma Rose (crowfly)
One poses as a Little Whore
One as a Lady Fair
I shove them both right through the door
And drag them by the hair
They begin to whimper "please, Sir, please!"
And I register their shock
When I force the lovelies to their knees
And introduce my rock hard cock
Little Whore begins to stroke
And Lady Fair to suck
They both understand that it's no joke
And that they're out of luck
But suddenly a lightning flash
Just as my hard on grows
Then my door bursts open with a crash
And there stands Enigma Rose
She quickly launches her attack
And kicks me in the ass
Then flips me rudely on my back
Says "This too shall not pass"
The two vixens beat a fleet retreat
But Enigma's here to stay
I have to say she's been quite sweet
Just as long as I obey.
One poses as a Little Whore
One as a Lady Fair
I shove them both right through the door
And drag them by the hair
They begin to whimper "please, Sir, please!"
And I register their shock
When I force the lovelies to their knees
And introduce my rock hard cock
Little Whore begins to stroke
And Lady Fair to suck
They both understand that it's no joke
And that they're out of luck
But suddenly a lightning flash
Just as my hard on grows
Then my door bursts open with a crash
And there stands Enigma Rose
She quickly launches her attack
And kicks me in the ass
Then flips me rudely on my back
Says "This too shall not pass"
The two vixens beat a fleet retreat
But Enigma's here to stay
I have to say she's been quite sweet
Just as long as I obey.
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Re: So Rudely
Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 4:14pm
I LOVE THIS WOMAN!
how dare you upset her, crow. how dare you!
how dare you upset her, crow. how dare you!
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Re: So Rudely
29th Jan 2015 4:17pm
I love her too, Minerva. I just wish she wasn't a figment. Hold on. Who's that pounding on my door?
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29th Jan 2015 4:33pm
Crow,mo chara,
i sincerely enjoy your cleverly crafted erotica!
But, i must say, that it is truly good that you have such a strong, admirable lady to take charge, and keep you in line...for it soo surely seems as if you need exactly this! :)))
i sincerely enjoy your cleverly crafted erotica!
But, i must say, that it is truly good that you have such a strong, admirable lady to take charge, and keep you in line...for it soo surely seems as if you need exactly this! :)))
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29th Jan 2015 4:39pm
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29th Jan 2015 4:57pm
When she rushed through the door I would have had a pitbull waiting for her ass.
....Let the dick dog days begin.
....Let the dick dog days begin.
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29th Jan 2015 9:23pm
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29th Jan 2015 5:45pm
That was definitely a fun little twist to the dominant role. A bit of karma aas he is thrust into submission. This is awesome! Excellent write!
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29th Jan 2015 9:21pm
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Anonymous
29th Jan 2015 6:11pm
Sir Crow,
There's the beautiful Enigma I so love! This woman is such a sweet aspect of your imagination. So fierce, so sexy and above all totally in control of any situation. Excellent ink sweetie!
Lady Muse
There's the beautiful Enigma I so love! This woman is such a sweet aspect of your imagination. So fierce, so sexy and above all totally in control of any situation. Excellent ink sweetie!
Lady Muse
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29th Jan 2015 9:19pm
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They begin to whimper "please, Sir, please!"
And I register their shock
When I force the lovelies to their knees
And introduce my cock <---- Lovely!
What an introduction indeed!
Nice write u little Maso ;)
Zazzles xoxo
ps add a word or two too describe your cock
like,
And introduce my rock hard cock>
i think it would flow a little better
And I register their shock
When I force the lovelies to their knees
And introduce my cock <---- Lovely!
What an introduction indeed!
Nice write u little Maso ;)
Zazzles xoxo
ps add a word or two too describe your cock
like,
And introduce my rock hard cock>
i think it would flow a little better
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30th Jan 2015 4:06am
Re: So Rudely
30th Jan 2015 8:44am
Tables turned, touche Enigma Rose!
I sense much give and take in this one...
Oh but she undermines you in such a satisfying way Crowfly, how does one get off that train?
I sense much give and take in this one...
Oh but she undermines you in such a satisfying way Crowfly, how does one get off that train?
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30th Jan 2015 3:30pm
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