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Jewels
Jewels be to the crowns
Of all those who find their own sound
Motivation from haters, fuck bad advice and hold it down
Mold your own ground, mud abounds...
Earth is our playground.
Of all those who find their own sound
Motivation from haters, fuck bad advice and hold it down
Mold your own ground, mud abounds...
Earth is our playground.
Published 29th Jan 2015
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29th Jan 2015 3:32pm
Your point of view is always refreshing, Loki. Earth can be viewed as a playground. Just follow the bouncing balls.
30th Jan 2015 3:59am
Remember the bouncing white ball that taught rhythm and syllables on that one musical PBS show from the 80's? That cadence and feel stuck with me forever. Thanks for reading crowfly.
3rd Feb 2015 6:02pm
"Mold your own ground, mud abounds" truly dig that line ...made me think of adobe houses and foundations for one but also think of how the world is full of vast unknown...waiting to be explored..thats the vibe i got from this..enjoyed :)
12th Feb 2015 11:40am
People built houses out of hills, mud, Earth never wanted us to suffer.
