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Watching you Sleep
Watching you sleep
Next to me
A wry smile on your lips
Morning light
Illuminates your beauty
You lie in slumber
A new day ahead
I've watched you for years
Same pattern, same glow
Soon you will rise
Collect yourself and stretch
I'll be watching
As I do each day
My joy in loving you
Next to me
A wry smile on your lips
Morning light
Illuminates your beauty
You lie in slumber
A new day ahead
I've watched you for years
Same pattern, same glow
Soon you will rise
Collect yourself and stretch
I'll be watching
As I do each day
My joy in loving you
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Re: Watching you Sleep
27th Jan 2015 12:40pm
A beautiful tender write. Moments watching the one you love sleep are indeed precious.
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Re: Watching you Sleep
27th Jan 2015 12:43pm
Re: Watching you Sleep
Anonymous
27th Jan 2015 1:23pm
this was so sweet, i think i feel a cavity forming. ;)
seriously, though...really good. really, really good. i like this side of you, cowboy.
seriously, though...really good. really, really good. i like this side of you, cowboy.
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27th Jan 2015 1:39pm
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27th Jan 2015 2:45pm
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27th Jan 2015 2:51pm
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27th Jan 2015 2:52pm
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27th Jan 2015 2:51pm
Re: Watching you Sleep
27th Jan 2015 5:46pm
true love is a beautiful thing to behold.. you show to true passion for your lady love in this ink Poet with love Brenda :)
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Re: Watching you Sleep
27th Jan 2015 5:51pm
I am a romantic who sometimes goes astray, but always comes home and to my senses
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Re: Watching you Sleep
27th Jan 2015 9:26pm
Is this the prodigal boomerang returning to the hand that threw it?
Loving the textures of the tender materials.
That's not to say I don't like my steak over-cooked sometimes either...
Nice work Poet.
Loving the textures of the tender materials.
That's not to say I don't like my steak over-cooked sometimes either...
Nice work Poet.
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Re: Watching you Sleep
27th Jan 2015 9:33pm
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28th Jan 2015 1:25am
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28th Jan 2015 1:47am
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28th Jan 2015 12:21pm
Re: Watching you Sleep
28th Jan 2015 12:42pm
Thank you
It's a quiet interlude and a nice piece of tranquility in my day ....
It's a quiet interlude and a nice piece of tranquility in my day ....