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I Wish!
I know I said I never make wishes
Because wishes never come true
But still I wish you loved me
Though I know it will never be
Cos i'm too a nice guy
Cos i'm too a good friend
Cos i'm too far away
Cos i'm too serious
Cos i'm too funny
Cos i'm a poet
Cos because because because
Blah blah blah
Bye bye goodbye
Why did I fall in love with you?
Cos i'm too a nice guy
Cos i'm too a good friend
Cos i'm too far away
Cos i'm too serious
Cos i'm too funny
Cos i'm a poet
Cos because because because
Blah blah blah
Bye bye goodbye
But still I wish you loved me!
Because wishes never come true
But still I wish you loved me
Though I know it will never be
Cos i'm too a nice guy
Cos i'm too a good friend
Cos i'm too far away
Cos i'm too serious
Cos i'm too funny
Cos i'm a poet
Cos because because because
Blah blah blah
Bye bye goodbye
Why did I fall in love with you?
Cos i'm too a nice guy
Cos i'm too a good friend
Cos i'm too far away
Cos i'm too serious
Cos i'm too funny
Cos i'm a poet
Cos because because because
Blah blah blah
Bye bye goodbye
But still I wish you loved me!
Published 27th Jan 2015
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Anonymous
27th Jan 2015 12:15pm
Ahh this is so sad :( I'm sorry to be reading this hurt my friend, if u ever wanna talk u know where I am :)
27th Jan 2015 1:42pm
27th Jan 2015 2:53pm
I wish they loved you too :-)
unrequited love I think is the worst pain possible - moving on is so difficult, but the only solution - unfortunately, in life acceptance is usually the nearest to contentment you can get.
excellent ink despite being very sad :-)
unrequited love I think is the worst pain possible - moving on is so difficult, but the only solution - unfortunately, in life acceptance is usually the nearest to contentment you can get.
excellent ink despite being very sad :-)
27th Jan 2015 7:40pm
Thanks for commenting David! I am all too familiar with unrequited love. It's the story of my life, in fact somewhere in my archives here is a poem called "Unrequited Love". Though I have plenty of poems that echo that sentiment. JJ
27th Jan 2015 5:44pm
sorry to read this JJ you have a beautiful poetic soul that should be worshipped with lust and passion with love Crim
27th Jan 2015 7:34pm
Oh Crim, thank you for the most kind comment. Worshipping my soul is the easy part, it's the physical side of my life that needs love... jj
27th Jan 2015 7:41pm
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