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naked
He wants to know her deeply
She wants to take him there
she spills to him her heart
she reveals her life's content
he doesn't laugh or run
in fact he shares his reflection
he lets her in slowly
not giving too much away
he wants her to yearn for him
in every kind of way
their souls intertwine
with each connection made
to feel this kind of satisfaction
is simply Devine
She wants to take him there
she spills to him her heart
she reveals her life's content
he doesn't laugh or run
in fact he shares his reflection
he lets her in slowly
not giving too much away
he wants her to yearn for him
in every kind of way
their souls intertwine
with each connection made
to feel this kind of satisfaction
is simply Devine
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22nd Jan 2015 00:03am
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22nd Jan 2015 1:54am
Thank you. I received a quote from someone dear to my heart that inspired this.The quote was about sharing everything about yourself is more naked than taking off your clothes. So true!
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22nd Jan 2015 5:37am
Excellence displayed herein. Well done!
Natalie, your theme is incontrovertible.
We must reveal that secret place in our
thoughts, bare our souls and share our spirits
if we wish to experience stellar intimacy.
The mechanical, physical act is easy, though
never as completely satisfying. I know.
xo
C.
Natalie, your theme is incontrovertible.
We must reveal that secret place in our
thoughts, bare our souls and share our spirits
if we wish to experience stellar intimacy.
The mechanical, physical act is easy, though
never as completely satisfying. I know.
xo
C.
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22nd Jan 2015 1:18pm
I couldn't agree more. Physical nakedness doesn't compare to the emotional connection when you lay everything out on the table and expose your vulnerability. Complete honesty and trust is crucial.
Always appreciate your comments Chad.
Xo
Natalie
Always appreciate your comments Chad.
Xo
Natalie
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Anonymous
22nd Jan 2015 3:03pm
Natalie.. beautiful write.. penned with honesty, and confidence.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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