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Walk in my shoes
Do you wonder what it would be like to walk in someone else's shoes? To feel what they feel? Well, what have you got to loose - all or nothing. Does it really get better through someone else's eyes? Or would you lapse into my endless cry. Would you wake up, day after day, numb from the mere pain you feel. That pain so excruciating you'd know your heart was going to bleed right through your chest.
I know you would, walking in my shoes, you'd become one with the darkness I live this life in,the forbidden, the unspeakable, the secret. So as I lay here in fear of the horror we all hold, I am chained to this prison, my body and soul.
I know you would, walking in my shoes, you'd become one with the darkness I live this life in,the forbidden, the unspeakable, the secret. So as I lay here in fear of the horror we all hold, I am chained to this prison, my body and soul.
Published 21st Jan 2015
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21st Jan 2015 11:04am
Wow this is deep! Nice work
21st Jan 2015 6:18pm
21st Jan 2015 5:05pm
whether this is true for you or just imagination, it is a powerful write with passion and honesty
:-)
I am not sure about the layout - below is just a suggestion
Do you wonder what it would be like
to walk in someone else's shoes?
To feel what they feel?
Well, what have you got
to loose - all or nothing.
Does it really get better
through someone else's eyes?
Or would you lapse into my endless cry.
Would you wake up, day after day,
numb from the mere pain you feel.
That pain so excruciating
you'd know your heart was
going to bleed right through your chest.
I know you would,
walking in my shoes,
you'd become one
with the darkness
I live this life in,
the forbidden, the unspeakable,
the secret.
So as I lay here in fear
of the horror we all hold,
I am chained to this prison,
my body and soul.
:-)
I am not sure about the layout - below is just a suggestion
Do you wonder what it would be like
to walk in someone else's shoes?
To feel what they feel?
Well, what have you got
to loose - all or nothing.
Does it really get better
through someone else's eyes?
Or would you lapse into my endless cry.
Would you wake up, day after day,
numb from the mere pain you feel.
That pain so excruciating
you'd know your heart was
going to bleed right through your chest.
I know you would,
walking in my shoes,
you'd become one
with the darkness
I live this life in,
the forbidden, the unspeakable,
the secret.
So as I lay here in fear
of the horror we all hold,
I am chained to this prison,
my body and soul.
21st Jan 2015 6:20pm
Its very Much true! Thank you:)
Yes of course that is a much better, I will most definitely use it in the future :) I just wrote it late at night & wanted to get all my thoughts out so I didn't look much into the layout.
Yes of course that is a much better, I will most definitely use it in the future :) I just wrote it late at night & wanted to get all my thoughts out so I didn't look much into the layout.
21st Jan 2015 6:19pm
21st Jan 2015 6:22pm
22nd Jan 2015 10:20am
