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Re: Dancers - Senryu
18th Jan 2015 4:18pm
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18th Jan 2015 4:22pm
It came to my mind during the recent and seemingly endless days of storm, clouds hurrying past ...
Re: Dancers - Senryu
Beautiful...the clouds have been amazing lately, I love how they dance...and how you captured the moment 😊
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re: Re: Dancers - Senryu
18th Jan 2015 7:24pm
I couldn't have put it differently,JeJe, the clouds have been really kind of dancing. It was spectacular ... Thanks for feeling it, too :-).
Re: Dancers - Senryu
18th Jan 2015 9:28pm
There's nothing more beautiful than to waltz through a storm; you really inspire me, Miss Chi. I love the clouds. Wonderful.
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re: Re: Dancers - Senryu
18th Jan 2015 9:37pm
Thanks so much for your lovely words, dear Pish. The elements are indeed inspiring :-).
Re: Dancers - Senryu
18th Jan 2015 10:23pm
you make them sound proud & domineering, Chi. mighty vision of those storm clouds...
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re: Re: Dancers - Senryu
19th Jan 2015 10:09pm
They were indeed dominant and impressive. You do have a potent imagination :-)! Thank you very much for your kind words, John!
Re: Dancers - Senryu
19th Jan 2015 00:18am
The Elephant In The Gloom
and as all of the other clouds
floated by, well there was one
that stood out, the lumbering oaf...
oh, but isn't there always, though..:)
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re: Re: Dancers - Senryu
19th Jan 2015 10:00pm
The Elephant in the Gloom, reminds me of you, I mean, the poetic style reminds me a little of your style. Thanks for leading me to the geologist's poems :-)! And for writing such a lovely comment.
Re: Dancers - Senryu
19th Jan 2015 3:27pm
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19th Jan 2015 9:37pm
Re: Dancers - Senryu
19th Jan 2015 6:56pm
The way you versed this was like a dance
with that vivid imagery you created so flawlessly... :)
with that vivid imagery you created so flawlessly... :)
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re: Re: Dancers - Senryu
Let me kiss you senseless, you darling, you :-). Thanks, dear Poe. You're ever so encouraging!
Re: Dancers - Senryu
22nd Jan 2015 10:26pm
Trance to these words under the cirrucomulus
with favorite tunes and waltz without a care...
Hell yeah what read...
You've inspired right now.
with favorite tunes and waltz without a care...
Hell yeah what read...
You've inspired right now.
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re: Re: Dancers - Senryu
Cool to have inspired :-). So did the cirrocumulus, pure and white and waltzing round and round ... Thank you, sadsmiles! Thanks for the RL adding!