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The Taking of Me
I followed you
quietly
You led me
naked
by the hand
under the shower
Into your arms.
holding me
holding you
kisses
falling
cascading
warm
inviting
like the water
Lips sliding against yours
like the pressing of our bodies
giving up my neck for your kisses
sweet and tender
The soap against our skin
remembering the delicacy
the artistry of movements
the love in our eyes
You dried me in soft towels
softer kisses
replaying the scene
Repaying the compliment
You carried me
the bedroom
I kissed you
You set me down
candles
dancing shadows
we joined them
kissing
touching
caressing
holding on for more
as you took me on adventures promised.
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Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 12:57pm
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14th Jan 2015 12:59pm
Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 3:07pm
re: Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 3:18pm
it's an older piece that just cried out to be re imaged it was rather tacky before at the end so showered it down and toweled it clean
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14th Jan 2015 3:23pm
Re: The Taking of Me
Anonymous
14th Jan 2015 3:11pm
Rose,
A nice cleansing of the erotic mind. Love the fresh showered scent that lingers in this write....
tornado
A nice cleansing of the erotic mind. Love the fresh showered scent that lingers in this write....
tornado

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re: Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 3:20pm
Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 3:31pm
Love the title, love the ambiance, the kissing and touching (sigh)....
brings me back to some sweet jacuzzi play.
brings me back to some sweet jacuzzi play.
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re: Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 3:32pm
Re: The Taking of Me
Anonymous
14th Jan 2015 3:39pm
Brilliant, and beautiful write..
Dave
Dave

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re: Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 3:41pm
Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 5:08pm
There's nothing quite like sharing a shower. So I enjoyed this thoroughly, its sensuality and romantic sense of adventure. I take this as a pleasure, Rose.
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re: Re: The Taking of Me
14th Jan 2015 6:13pm
Yes sharing a bath or shower is sensual and highly romantic
it's a lovely thing to do together
it's a lovely thing to do together
Re: The Taking of Me
15th Jan 2015 11:43pm
great write
love this...
kisses
falling
cascading
warm
inviting
like the water ... mmmmmm
love this...
kisses
falling
cascading
warm
inviting
like the water ... mmmmmm
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16th Jan 2015 6:05am
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16th Jan 2015 00:51am
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