Ruins - Senryu

composed w/bereaving sentiment. well done, Chi...

Your kind words mean so much to me, John. Thank you!

Will read your latest precious poems in the near future ... Tomorrow! :-)

nice to see you back, and
a thoughtful Poem - I wouldn't
bother with a house of cards,
stick to clubs..:)

Thanks for the kind welcome :-) although I'm still awaiting the new graphic card. Using my husband's laptop which isn't much comfortable. Therefore I'm not often here :-(.

:-). No, that would be quite okay :-)!

A bitter event in one's life. Much strength to you GM. Thanks for sharing Chi.

I say thanks on the part of GM. Hard to see him suffer :-(. You're welcome and thanks for your thoughtful comment, xmar.

Ur heart is sweet my dear lady :)

My heart is a soft shell, dear Poe :-(. And you are a friend to me since you always know how to lift me up. x

the winner takes it all...

If there's one left ... sigh.

Life analogous to the deck is always striking to me.  I have found myself picking up pieces more than once; I leave the jokers lay. Imaginative, inspirational, and well played, Miss Chi.

Thank you, dear Pish, for your deep comment. But what does "leave the jokers lay" mean exactly? I tried to look it up but haven't found an explanation :-(.

Thanks for your PM :-).

Crash!

Reshuffle the cards ...

WOW Miss Chi :)

Thanks for WOWing, dear Brinda :-)!

One stanza and
Heartsank in sadness to beautiful words.

Thanks for your heartfelt comment, sadsmiles. I'm not happy about the 'heart sank in sadness' :-(. Will have to write something more upbeat!

It is amazing how so few words can depict a world of pain; and paint such a vivid picture.

Honored by your kind words, forever_young. That's what we aim for with writing haiku. That everything comes dense and like a short story. Happy if it works :-).

Your talent is overwhelming. :-)

Blush ... Thank you! You have to read LobodeSanPedro, to begin with ...