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Gills
Those drifting dreamers welcome me
They find comfort in the sea
Their selkies come in on the tide
Offer to take me for a ride
I cross to them on burning sand
Farewell to the dying land
So long to those flaming hills
It's high time that I grew gills.
They find comfort in the sea
Their selkies come in on the tide
Offer to take me for a ride
I cross to them on burning sand
Farewell to the dying land
So long to those flaming hills
It's high time that I grew gills.
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 8:06pm
Yes! Sir Crow I love this...your calling back to the Mother of us all. Beautiful sweetheart...simply beautiful!
Lady Muse
Lady Muse
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12th Jan 2015 8:10pm
Thank you, Lady Muse. Ever hear Jimi Hendrix' "A Merman I Shall Turn to Be"? Great words and even better guitar.
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2015 8:26pm
Sir Crow, no I don't believe I have, when I was growing up it was the cool thing to like Hendrix and led zep but I couldn't stand either of them haha! Always the black sheep am I :P
But yours was perfect..
Lady Muse
But yours was perfect..
Lady Muse
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Re: Gills
12th Jan 2015 8:36pm
I love the ocean and wish it were my home but I'd want to be a shark ha :) beautiful ink Sir Crow with love Crim
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13th Jan 2015 3:06pm
I found "Moby Dick" to be tough sailing, but I also love ocean adventures. Kind of hard to find my sea legs, though. Thanks, AlJoe.
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Anonymous
13th Jan 2015 12:10pm
there are terrors that lurk in the sea. you must be brave to wish to be among them!
nice ink, crow. well done.
nice ink, crow. well done.
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13th Jan 2015 3:08pm
You're right, Minerva. There are countless unknown species way down in the deep. Just waiting for an excuse...
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14th Jan 2015 8:55am
Nothing quite beats being immersed in buoyant surf. Depending on your subscription to environmental skepticism or not - we may soon have the choice taken out of our hands!
Gills sound like a sound evolutionary step, both emotionally and physiologically!
Gills sound like a sound evolutionary step, both emotionally and physiologically!
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Re: Gills
15th Jan 2015 4:07am
'whatever we lose, like a you or a me,
it's always ourselves we find in the sea.' Cummings...
it's always ourselves we find in the sea.' Cummings...
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15th Jan 2015 6:57pm
Beautiful lines, John. "And how do you like your blue-eyed boy, Mr. Death." That's one of the few Cummings quotes I remember. It's stuck with me since high school. "Jesus, he was a handsome man..."
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29th Jan 2015 5:59am
Return to the source. From there we cast off our extraneous parts. Just watch out for shogoths.
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