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BITTERSWEET REFRAIN
As she bathe in the glow
Of heavenly splendor
Gazillion eyes are watching
Admiring her beauty, so captivating
Leaving them breathless and mesmerized
As they gaze through the night
Painting a silhouette on the ground
Which follows her every sultry move
Dark as the raven was her hair
Long and flowing like the waves
Of the silent sea
Beneath the shadow of her smile
Hides the sorrows of the past
Kept alive by every drop
Of celestial tears that create
A bittersweet refrain
Of heavenly splendor
Gazillion eyes are watching
Admiring her beauty, so captivating
Leaving them breathless and mesmerized
As they gaze through the night
Painting a silhouette on the ground
Which follows her every sultry move
Dark as the raven was her hair
Long and flowing like the waves
Of the silent sea
Beneath the shadow of her smile
Hides the sorrows of the past
Kept alive by every drop
Of celestial tears that create
A bittersweet refrain
Published 10th Jan 2015
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10th Jan 2015 12:45pm
Oh,
I miss your poetry boss,
Awesome write, nature will so much admire your writes
nice ink sir!!!
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I miss your poetry boss,
Awesome write, nature will so much admire your writes
nice ink sir!!!
BrrrRrrrrHhhh
10th Jan 2015 1:04pm
10th Jan 2015 1:47pm
this is juz beautifully sculpted piece.. Of her beauty n a more striking s2..shadow n smile n sorrows n celestial tears n refrain, masterflow i feel.shine on more poetengr.tq:)
11th Jan 2015 8:42am
Tender and seductive. Every woman would love these words to be about her.
11th Jan 2015 11:14am
Maybe it's true, there's a tragedy behind every beautiful thing. Great writing Engr.
17th May 2015 6:12am
Very admirable the way you kept this a portrait of her and weren't overcome with the desire to inject yourself into the piece.
