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Salivate
Be a follower tonight
Those eyes
yours only
on my tail
Wanna be seeing
what I'm imagining
be revealing
pouncing
you're mouth dripping
salivating
devouring
on me
satisfying
Hear my words
make me spell
describe
descriptive
spoken to delirious
Be a follower tonight
Please
here
now
take my lead..
Those eyes
yours only
on my tail
Wanna be seeing
what I'm imagining
be revealing
pouncing
you're mouth dripping
salivating
devouring
on me
satisfying
Hear my words
make me spell
describe
descriptive
spoken to delirious
Be a follower tonight
Please
here
now
take my lead..
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Re: Salivate
10th Jan 2015 10:05am
Re: Salivate
Anonymous
10th Jan 2015 12:39pm
this makes me....dizzy. like i'm drunk and don't have an option but to follow. good flow!

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re: Re: Salivate
10th Jan 2015 1:53pm
Re: Salivate
10th Jan 2015 4:13pm
This has such urgency. "Take my lead." Sexual tension is putting it mildly. This is more like electricity. Great job, Rose.
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re: Re: Salivate
10th Jan 2015 4:23pm
Re: Salivate
Anonymous
10th Jan 2015 4:23pm
Rose,
This feels like an easy tail.....er trail....to follow :-) Lead on!
tornado
This feels like an easy tail.....er trail....to follow :-) Lead on!
tornado

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re: Re: Salivate
10th Jan 2015 4:41pm
Re: Salivate
10th Jan 2015 4:32pm
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10th Jan 2015 4:41pm