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Salivating
I heard the gospel
subtle
majestic
my thoughts tranquil
becoming that good girl
transforming
watching you
salivating
for me
I'm
following
your lead.
subtle
majestic
my thoughts tranquil
becoming that good girl
transforming
watching you
salivating
for me
I'm
following
your lead.
Published 10th Jan 2015
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10th Jan 2015 7:40pm
I find it interesting that he's salivating for a "good girl", who's apparently unperturbed under his eye. But she's obviously aware of it, and probably enjoying it. This is a good companion for "Salivate" for its change in leadership. This does have subtlety. There seems to be some amused contempt for the example being set. Or maybe it's just playful. Thanks for making me think this morning, Rose.
10th Jan 2015 7:53pm
Aww thank you Crow
i do try to create a thinking piece
Love love love your interpretation and thoughts on it
i do try to create a thinking piece
Love love love your interpretation and thoughts on it
11th Jan 2015 00:00am
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Anonymous
11th Jan 2015 00:35am
oh my. this is soooooo badly good. delicious.
11th Jan 2015 7:22am
