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Mr Sunshine
Glorious be the sunshine breaking into
the day, probing for weaknesses the curtains
blind to the warming advances.
I'll not let you in here awhile
he's still dreaming about last night.
as for me?
I'm just snuggled next to him
day dreaming
yeah, about last night too
drinking in the fragrances
feeding off his body heat
this is all the breakfast I require
So Mr sunshine..
that leaves just you
but you can wait just a little longer
because right now he's with me you see.
**Edit of an older piece
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Re: Mr Sunshine
9th Jan 2015 2:04pm
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9th Jan 2015 2:14pm
I'd forgotten all about this piece
seemed fitting given the cold gloomy weather to reinvigorate it
only a slight edit to be fair the first was delightful anyway :) xD
seemed fitting given the cold gloomy weather to reinvigorate it
only a slight edit to be fair the first was delightful anyway :) xD
Re: Mr Sunshine
Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 2:22pm
such a sweet write. there is something about snuggling in the early morning that is...tender. great job!
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9th Jan 2015 2:27pm
Early mornings are splendid anyway but I agree if it's alongside someone special, that makes your heart sing then its just perfect.
nice commenting minerva
nice commenting minerva
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9th Jan 2015 3:13pm
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9th Jan 2015 3:17pm
glad you thought of it as a classic
To be truthful I didn't remember it lol
but yeah I kinda like it second time around :)
To be truthful I didn't remember it lol
but yeah I kinda like it second time around :)
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9th Jan 2015 3:33pm
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9th Jan 2015 7:59pm
Re: Mr Sunshine
9th Jan 2015 4:24pm
Beautiful write, Rose.. Morning with that special someone are lovely.. thanks for sharing..
Dave
Dave
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9th Jan 2015 8:00pm
Re: Mr Sunshine
Anonymous
9th Jan 2015 5:17pm
Rose,
This creation of your own warmth and brightness has surely made the sun jealous! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
This creation of your own warmth and brightness has surely made the sun jealous! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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9th Jan 2015 8:01pm
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10th Jan 2015 00:04am
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10th Jan 2015 4:37am
Re: Mr Sunshine
10th Jan 2015 00:12am
There's nothing quite so reassuring as watching a lover as he or she sleeps. They're in kind of an idealized state, in such peace. Wonderful job, Rose.
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10th Jan 2015 4:38am