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Your Rape Fantasy
You’re above me,
and I patiently hear out
Your furious abuses:
I’ll fuck you till you’ll cry,
Until you bleed,
My eyes wrapped shut….
You take turns on me
Violently spread me open,
Shoving your hardness into my mouth
Suck harder, harder, no..
harder...deeper into your throat...
As deep as you can go, baby,
And then enter my satin cunt,
Pushing your thickness inside
You are
Exquisitely hard
Flip me over
And peel open my
Clenched and tender cavities
Penetrating everything you can think of
To quiet the shadowy pillaging in your mind
Visceral assaults culminating into
Hungry, guttural grunts
and pungent, slick skin.
Until you can’t anymore.
I smile. I can’t help it.
Feeling despondent, really.
I just wanted to rock your world, you say,
No pun intended.
and I patiently hear out
Your furious abuses:
I’ll fuck you till you’ll cry,
Until you bleed,
My eyes wrapped shut….
You take turns on me
Violently spread me open,
Shoving your hardness into my mouth
Suck harder, harder, no..
harder...deeper into your throat...
As deep as you can go, baby,
And then enter my satin cunt,
Pushing your thickness inside
You are
Exquisitely hard
Flip me over
And peel open my
Clenched and tender cavities
Penetrating everything you can think of
To quiet the shadowy pillaging in your mind
Visceral assaults culminating into
Hungry, guttural grunts
and pungent, slick skin.
Until you can’t anymore.
I smile. I can’t help it.
Feeling despondent, really.
I just wanted to rock your world, you say,
No pun intended.
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6th Jan 2015 8:04pm
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6th Jan 2015 8:09pm
Fine vivid writing, Virginia. Personally, I'd keep it at the level of fantasy, if that. I've never tried to get really rough. Role playing's cool. I wouldn't mind a woman jumping me. I'd just like a few minutes to prepare.
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6th Jan 2015 8:19pm
in all seriousness i see the truth behind this poem. I've seen the pain women had to endure and the stories they've told me. but this is now. your not alone in this.
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 8:30pm
I must say it was hard....to read
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6th Jan 2015 9:47pm
getting back to the poem: your abuser needs to perfect his 'rape' technique. a woman shld always get the most out of her fantasies...
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Re: Your Rape Fantasy
6th Jan 2015 10:22pm
Avoiding Puns
this is difficult to read as are some of the comments made by others.
maybe its a generational thing, maybe I just don't get it - still whilst I might not like the subject matter I would defend to the death your right to write about it
:-)
this is difficult to read as are some of the comments made by others.
maybe its a generational thing, maybe I just don't get it - still whilst I might not like the subject matter I would defend to the death your right to write about it
:-)
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re: Re: Your Rape Fantasy
6th Jan 2015 10:32pm
David, I would dare say that this was a little bit of a difficult write for me. And it was meant less as an erotic write and more as a sarcastic one. A culmination of bad experiences.
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Anonymous
6th Jan 2015 10:58pm
Bad experiences indeed.. Really well written, but so much pain.. And you're right i don't really feel it's erotic.. I sure it was difficult to write.. as well as it was to read.. but your skills are very good.. Thanks for sharing this heart wrenching write..
Dave
Dave
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