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First
I want you
you to take me
take me like it was my first
you to be my first
you
with that experience gained
be the man
my only man
bestow it all upon me,
from those sensual pent-up needs
to sexy dark desires you have hidden
speak to me of your wants
taste the flow from my lips
Know I speak truths too
telling me and you
just how it's going to be
be from now on.
you to take me
take me like it was my first
you to be my first
you
with that experience gained
be the man
my only man
bestow it all upon me,
from those sensual pent-up needs
to sexy dark desires you have hidden
speak to me of your wants
taste the flow from my lips
Know I speak truths too
telling me and you
just how it's going to be
be from now on.
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Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 9:55am
re: Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 9:57am
yeah I thought you might like the image EM
thankyou for the RL
much appreciated
thankyou for the RL
much appreciated
Re: First
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2nd Jan 2015 11:15am
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re: Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 1:34pm
Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 11:29am
LOVE LOVE LOVE this Rose!
This goes perfect with my future plans with my man.
Lovely way to start the year ; )
This goes perfect with my future plans with my man.
Lovely way to start the year ; )
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re: Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 1:35pm
then you will just love my next poem upload hehe
I hope he's a willing participant
most men love the sense of sexy control
I hope he's a willing participant
most men love the sense of sexy control
Re: First
Anonymous
2nd Jan 2015 11:34am
i'm not sure how anyone could refuse an invitation like that.
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re: Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 1:38pm
yeah most men are putty
lol
It's us women that really dictate in the sensual sexy moments
easy to manipulate when their blood starts pumping in certain area's
though no disrespect to men kind
it's how it is
they lose the power of thought in those moments
lol
It's us women that really dictate in the sensual sexy moments
easy to manipulate when their blood starts pumping in certain area's
though no disrespect to men kind
it's how it is
they lose the power of thought in those moments
Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 1:14pm
This is splendid in its expression of sheer devotion and why it's desired and needed.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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re: Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 1:42pm
most women, me included do sooo desire to be,
on occasion
taken by an experienced command given
if they know what they are doing that is,
it can be rewarding
indeed
bloody earth shatteringly amazing
to put it mildly xD
on occasion
taken by an experienced command given
if they know what they are doing that is,
it can be rewarding
indeed
bloody earth shatteringly amazing
to put it mildly xD
Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 3:55pm
"Know I speak truths too" is the key line for me. Really enjoyed this, Rose.
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re: Re: First
2nd Jan 2015 4:48pm
Thank you Crow
xD
if you can speak truths to the one your going to lay with then it's rather bloody special indeed
xD
if you can speak truths to the one your going to lay with then it's rather bloody special indeed