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Wishful Thinking
I forgot to smile
while I looked in the mirror,
scared to break the glass
with the friction
of my teeth.
But, to be honest,
I was looking for you in the reflection
with hope upon my shoulder,
that you would kiss me,
and fog up the glass.
while I looked in the mirror,
scared to break the glass
with the friction
of my teeth.
But, to be honest,
I was looking for you in the reflection
with hope upon my shoulder,
that you would kiss me,
and fog up the glass.
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30th Dec 2014 5:03am
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Anonymous
30th Dec 2014 2:15am
UnleashedHeathen,
Your true wish reflects brightly in your words! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Your true wish reflects brightly in your words! Enjoyed!!!
tornado
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30th Dec 2014 5:04am
Re: Wishful Thinking
Such a lovingly written piece, yet with an erotic feel to it... Love it:)
And I agree with Gabe's selected lines... They are poetic genius :)
And I agree with Gabe's selected lines... They are poetic genius :)
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