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Daybreak Yearning
In the stretching cast of stirring orb
Dappled yawn of lights first throw
Encased by cumulus of downy warmth
Harboured beneath fibrous humus
Stir shores of slumbered longing
In trepid outset
Feet shod with fingertips
Hesitant in heart drummed step
Through undulations of Egyptian cotton
Discovery abound in silken heat
Unveiling in palm and splayed fingers
Exploration of sumptuous terrain
Across frictionless curves
Between soft trapping folds
Wanderlust is stirred
Summoned arrival of the greater host
Murmured approval of my attentions
Pressed against your smooth escarpment
Flooded with your evening fragrance
Drowned in your contours
Oblivious in your sandy state
Of my shuddering rigid cravings
Restrained by your occupied need
Despite my blistering yearning
To burrow deeper into your lavish aphrodisia
An emotive chemical waterslide
Of turgid lust, vessel bound
Smashing, careening, squealing towards
Anticipation’s final plunge
Chancing warm whirlpools
Dappled yawn of lights first throw
Encased by cumulus of downy warmth
Harboured beneath fibrous humus
Stir shores of slumbered longing
In trepid outset
Feet shod with fingertips
Hesitant in heart drummed step
Through undulations of Egyptian cotton
Discovery abound in silken heat
Unveiling in palm and splayed fingers
Exploration of sumptuous terrain
Across frictionless curves
Between soft trapping folds
Wanderlust is stirred
Summoned arrival of the greater host
Murmured approval of my attentions
Pressed against your smooth escarpment
Flooded with your evening fragrance
Drowned in your contours
Oblivious in your sandy state
Of my shuddering rigid cravings
Restrained by your occupied need
Despite my blistering yearning
To burrow deeper into your lavish aphrodisia
An emotive chemical waterslide
Of turgid lust, vessel bound
Smashing, careening, squealing towards
Anticipation’s final plunge
Chancing warm whirlpools
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Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 00:39am
Wow. Incredible. As usual, perfect language for the perfect evocation. So much adulation and eroticism. My favorite of yours so far. LOL, don't be taken aback because I've been saying this to a lot of poets; it seems everyone's on a masterpiece kick atm. :)
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re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 1:04am
You are certainly no exclusion from that masterpiece kick Toni - I now have tissues stationed at my desk for mopping up a variety of reactive fluids ;)
I realised I had the word cast in the first two lines so I have changed the second cast to 'throw' - very happy for further suggestions
I realised I had the word cast in the first two lines so I have changed the second cast to 'throw' - very happy for further suggestions
Re: Daybreak Yearning
Anonymous
27th Dec 2014 00:55am
oh i love this! so many good lines/phrases that i'm not going to take the time to highlight them. so so good. it gets me going without me knowing that i'm getting going!

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re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 1:07am
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Anonymous
27th Dec 2014 1:22am
from now on, believe
that haiku comments will be
the normal exchange
you make me smile, mr. 76!
that haiku comments will be
the normal exchange
you make me smile, mr. 76!

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re: re: re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 5:29am
Awesome!
likewise Minerva your soul warms me with it's beaming upturned edges.
likewise Minerva your soul warms me with it's beaming upturned edges.
Re: Daybreak Yearning
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27th Dec 2014 1:08am
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re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 5:06am
I've been itching to use 'wanderlust' in a poem!
Thank you Gabriel - your words are encouragement for greater works!
Thank you Gabriel - your words are encouragement for greater works!
re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 5:07am
Wrought with thick lusty banter - thank you HottNess, you comments are most appreciated.
Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 2:30pm
Re: Daybreak Yearning
27th Dec 2014 4:52pm
Franko so beautiful an erotic, dripping with sensual passion.. your ink has me enamored.. with love Crim
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re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
28th Dec 2014 8:46pm
Thank you Crim for your gorgeous words - I am trying to share some of this down-under summer warmth!
Re: Daybreak Yearning
28th Dec 2014 8:32pm
"Chancing warm whirlpools" is always worth the risk. "Wanderlust" is a particularly well chosen word. Great journey, Frank.
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re: Re: Daybreak Yearning
29th Dec 2014 8:26am
I just wish the dice would fall in my favour a bit more often, if you know what I mean Sir Crow.