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Re: Not even - Senryu
16th Dec 2014 1:34pm
re: Re: Not even - Senryu
16th Dec 2014 1:37pm
Ah! That's much more fitting! Grrr ... Hadn't come into my mind ... Thanks, xmar82! Enjoyed your words :-).
Re: Not even - Senryu
16th Dec 2014 6:09pm
re: Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 6:30pm
re: Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 6:32pm
Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 5:21am
I'm reading this as the end of a relationship that left the protagonist with nothing to cling to ... A season has passed and the future is unknown
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re: Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 6:34pm
You're reading this right. And since life is a circle there will be another springtime :-).
Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 11:53am
LSP in my opinion nailed it... All I can add
is if that's the case, you're def. Gonna be
a catch for anyone...
is if that's the case, you're def. Gonna be
a catch for anyone...
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re: Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 6:37pm
Are you sweet or are you sweet? Thanks, dear Poe, for your encouraging words :-)!
Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 7:51pm
re: Re: Not even - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 8:11pm
Faber est quisque fortunae suae. :-)
Serio dico.
Honored by your comment, sodium589 :-).
Serio dico.
Honored by your comment, sodium589 :-).
Re: Not even - Senryu
21st Dec 2014 6:52pm
Let go
There's not only spring
So throw away time
Enjoy the unknown
Heartfelt ink Miss Chi
You inspire
There's not only spring
So throw away time
Enjoy the unknown
Heartfelt ink Miss Chi
You inspire
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re: Re: Not even - Senryu
25th Dec 2014 4:08pm
So do you, sadsmiles!
Love your haiku like thoughts to my "little one".
Reading your poems I feel at home somehow :-).
Love your haiku like thoughts to my "little one".
Reading your poems I feel at home somehow :-).