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Re: Burning - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 9:34pm
re: Re: Burning - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 9:41pm
Thank you so much, Aondokator :-). Have fun reading oriental poetry since it's worth the effort!
Re: Burning - Senryu
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17th Dec 2014 9:37pm
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re: Re: Burning - Senryu
Glad you enjoyed, Gabriel - oh, well, that's at least what I hope for :-)! (・_☆)・‥
re: Re: Burning - Senryu
17th Dec 2014 11:32pm
Re: Poem - Senryu
18th Dec 2014 00:16am
I love the image,
but if you were a poem
you'd be one of
your own, I think..:)
but if you were a poem
you'd be one of
your own, I think..:)
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re: Re: Poem - Senryu
Thanks a lot, Paul,
for your thoughtful comment
which I first misunderstood.
But you are right, everyone
is or at least should be
the author of
his or her own poem :-).
That's a beautiful idea ...
for your thoughtful comment
which I first misunderstood.
But you are right, everyone
is or at least should be
the author of
his or her own poem :-).
That's a beautiful idea ...
Re: Poem - Senryu
18th Dec 2014 00:51am
Aww, i loved this, great write, i enjoyed the read :3 Hope you have a lovely day c:
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re: Re: Poem - Senryu
18th Dec 2014 11:39am
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Enigma! Glad you enjoyed! Have a lovely day yourself :-)!
Re: Poem - Senryu
18th Dec 2014 1:36am
re: Re: Poem - Senryu
20th Dec 2014 3:55pm
Thank you for those kind words, xmar82 :-).
That's what haiku should convey - a message within only 17 syllables. Glad if I achieved it with this little poem :-).
That's what haiku should convey - a message within only 17 syllables. Glad if I achieved it with this little poem :-).
Re: Poem - Senryu
18th Dec 2014 1:38am
re: Re: Poem - Senryu
20th Dec 2014 3:59pm
Aw, John! That's beautifully put! You are quite a romantic! Would you agree if I said that every man is a poem's interpreter?
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20th Dec 2014 9:52pm
Re: Poem - Senryu
21st Dec 2014 2:47am
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4th Jan 2015 5:41pm
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24th Mar 2015 11:04pm