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Red Blood
My ears are on fire,
screaming with what
pumps in my veins,
I feel everything
that goes on,
every pulse and flow
of current that is me,
causes sound,
causes fever,
causes feeling,
I feel the blood start
to circle my body,
my soul floods, and I cry.
screaming with what
pumps in my veins,
I feel everything
that goes on,
every pulse and flow
of current that is me,
causes sound,
causes fever,
causes feeling,
I feel the blood start
to circle my body,
my soul floods, and I cry.
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16th Dec 2014 5:58pm
I have the same feeling on
a tube train on the circle line,
getting pushed around and
around through dark tunnels
and all in vein!
a tube train on the circle line,
getting pushed around and
around through dark tunnels
and all in vein!
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17th Dec 2014 5:24am
I love trains. The Circle line, that sounds so interesting. I feel your frustration though. It's mean for someone to push you around anyway; in the dark is doubly so.
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